The world stands out on either side
No wider than the heart is wide;
Above the world is stretched the sky;--
No higher than the soul is high.
He translated the Book at home, writing by himself-he moved three times during the process--or sometimes he worked in a rented house in Taipei's suburbia.
This is his work schedule:
The Isaiah sections of the Nephi books presented unique problems. He used the Chinese Bible for reference only, and translated the Book of Mormon copy in his own way. (Whereas the English Book of Mormon's Isaiah agrees with the Bible approximately 90%.)
"I don't like the Chinese Bible translation at all. In frequent areas, the doctrine and meanings are translated wrong. Often a word does not retain its original or actual meaning. I have tried not to allow such ambiguities in the Book of Mormon translation. The Bible is neither the Mandarin nor classic style. It is just a peculiar and nebulous one. I have used the Mandarin style."
He found many words troublesome to translate, but none that study could not absolve. It took him one complete translation just to get down how to work recurring names and idioms in every context. Then he could go back and make it uniform. The translation is not high-flown or low-strung. Everyone can read it.
Transliterating proper nouns was another problem. If a name occurs frequently in the Bible and is well-known, he did not change it. If it is new or infrequent he made his own transliteration according to the Pronouncing Vocabulary in the English Book of Mormon. (He would like to have changed "Ni Fei" to "Ni Huai" as the English, but everyone has been accustomed to using the former for so long, he left it.)
Any Chinese character of similar pronunciation is available for transliteration. Sometimes a meaning was so exotic he would create a new word to fit the need. (Joseph Smith used a combination of the English "more" and the Reformed Egyptian "mon" --good-- to create "Mormon," the English equivalent of the characters on the Gold Plates--a very good man!)
The most troublesome English idioms were "and it came to pass" and "Behold!" The former he fortunately omitted entirely. He included about 50% of the latter where they are essential to the meaning.
The Book was printed from rotogravure-type metal plates. The printers will correct the mistakes on the plates and will use them again for subsequent editions. In perhaps two instances they must engrave a page again because of major omissions or errors in the original.
Elder Hu is hopeful that soon-future editions will include color lithographs of the events, as well as footnotes, the index, synopsis of chapters, and other helps. He will not translate these, however. "These are easy, and can be done by anyone." The authorization for these things will come from Hong Kong.
"A translator must be careful not to translate doctrine according to his own opinion, but as what is literally intended in the original. If it is otherwise it is dishonest. It is tragic that our Chinese Bible is this way in parts." From all parts of the Island, the U.S., and other foreign countries, has come testimony of the purity of Elder Hu's translation--that God "gave him power from on high, by the means which were before prepared, to translate the Book of Mormon; which contains a record of a fallen people, and the fullness of the Gospel of Jesus Christ to Gentiles and to the Jews also; ...proving to the world that the holy scriptures are true, and that God does inspire men and call them to his holy work in this age and generation, as well as in generations of old ..." (D&C 20:8-9,11).
The Book requires two major things from the serious investigator. 1) A person must know the doctrine he is studying. "He can't be a Mormon just because his ancestors are." He must know why. 2) He must accept the doctrine of complete Free Agency. He has to think independently; he can't run to his priest or monk for everything he does. "As he reads, he is responsible only to his conscience and God." That is a challenge.
"We Chinese are a little different from Westerners. The Westerners are from stock that have had the Gospel and many have hardened their hearts against it. We have not. [Perhaps this is the difference between ignorance and innocence!] There are many parts of the Book that apply to us directly. Alma 32 is perhaps the best."
The Book of Mormon teachings fit Chinese philosophy because "there are so many good moral analects and standards." Like the Book of Mormon prophets, Confucius and Mencius stressed love, kindness, empathy. The Book of Mormon fits better than the Bible because it is clearer. "It shows that God is just and no respecter of nations or persons. The people can accept it."
Lao Tzu is very like the Book of Mormon. He said, "The proud shall fail." The Book of Mormon will do much to overcome the "false traditions" that prevent a person from receiving the Gospel.
Alma wrote, "For behold the Lord doth grant unto all nations, of their own nation and tongue, to teach his word, yea, in wisdom, all the he seeth fit that they should have; therefore we see that the Lord doth counsel in wisdom, according to that which is just and true." (Alma 29:8). Speaking of the future, Elder Hu is anxious to the the Chinese Doctrine and Covenants. He feels that its doctrine is deeper than the Book of Mormon. "It is the next logical step," when the Lord "seeth fit."
At fifty-three, He Wei I can call his life full, to say the least. He is the father of three girls--age 16, 10, and 9. "My wife and family are happy and support me in everything I do, especially about Church work." He graduated from primary school at fourteen. He attended some night school classes, but never went to high school or college. He was a colonel at a mainland military academy, took training in Morse code, and worked for the Chinese National Aviation Corporation (CNAC) before he came to Taiwan seventeen years ago--shortly before the Communists entered Shanghai. "I am grateful to have come here, because if I did not, I would not have the Gospel."
The missionaries tracted him out. "I saw them coming when I was strolling outside, two blocks from my house, with my second daughter in my arms. I tried to go farther to avoid them. My eldest daughter ran to me and dragged me back with gleeful cries of 'Americans, Americans!' I had to listen."
It took ten months, two painful sessions with the seventeen-lesson series, and about five sets of Elders to get results. His major problem was the Word of Wisdom. He smoked. He drank. He gambled. Finally, "I quit all at once. I gave my cigar, cigarettes, and all my pipes to my butler." On Christmas Eve, 1958, they baptized him.
"The best of those early members went to the States. I am too old to go. My family is here. I would not be happy in a foreign country." Surely, here he is a happy man.
After President Hu had seen and corrected [the] draft for this article, he wrote the following to the writer (with a strong exhortation to omit "flattery"): "The translation was done through much prayer and fasting by the leaders, missionaries, and members of the Church in Taiwan, Hong Kong, and states, also through the Holy Ghost and power from on high, yet errors are unavoidable because of my weakness. I shall be appreciative to receive any comments from readers for [the third edition] revision's reference."
The best way to characterize Hu Wei I is this (and the writer thinks the "flattery" inadequate): "His life was gentle, and all the elements so mixed in him that Nature might stand up and say to all the world, 'This was a man'" (Shakespeare, Julius Caesar V:V).